Wikipedia:Peer review/Christina Milian/archive1

Christina Milian
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I feel it really need to be improved. I hope to get it to GA status, but I can't do it by myself. Please look through and give me your thoughts!

Thanks,  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  01:51, 10 March 2008 (UTC)

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That's a start for you! The Rambling Man (talk) 18:13, 17 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Image:Christinamilain.jpg has no fair use rationale for inclusion in this article. - Removed  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  01:00, 22 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Attend to the warning template, the copyediting issue - if need be, head over to WP:LOCE. - Done  Corn.u.co.pia ♥  Disc.us.sion  07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Year ranges in infobox should use en-dash instead of hyphen per WP:DASH. **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "Milian did commercials" unpleasant reading. **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "wasn't" - avoid contractions, so "was not". **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "I heard Santa On the Radio." - "I Heard Santa On The Radio". or "I Heard Santa on the Radio" or something else? The current doesn't look right to me! **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''   Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Acting career section is four short paras, consider merging and improving the prose.
 * "Dec. 10 — 16 " - 10–16 December at the least... **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * "who is the ex of her ex, Beau Dozier. " - too casual... More encyclopaedic language needed. **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Why text bold in the Singles section? **✅--  Corn.u.co.pia'''  Discussion  06:33, 18 March 2008 (UTC)
 * Films, TV appearances and awards all need citations.
 * References should use the cite web template. - Done  Corn.u.co.pia ♥  Disc.us.sion  07:54, 6 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Please do not use graphics like "Done" to save space. Thanks, Ruhrfisch &gt;&lt;&gt; &deg; &deg; 00:10, 19 March 2008 (UTC)