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Chrono Trigger: Crimson Echoes
This peer review discussion has been closed. After a successful GAN review, I now plan to place it at FAC. I am not sure what else to do for the article so I would appreciate any comments that will help improve the page. GamerPro64 00:48, 15 September 2011 (UTC)
 * lead
 * The plot description in paragraph 2 makes it sound like the game was completed, but then the third paragraph undermines that by noting a final was never released. Does the beta go through the entire game? If not, the plot description shouldn't be made with the authortive prose that one could complete the game. If so, the 3rd paragraph should note that one or both releases can still beat the game.


 * Added information that the game can be played through. GamerPro64  14:04, 25 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Characters
 * Should also link to List of Chrono Trigger characters like the previous section.


 * Done. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * You should also link to indivisual names.


 * Done. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Development
 * around "98% complete" - that seems like its part of a larger quote. If so, it would be better to extend the quote a bit and get all the relevant info or remove the quotation marks. The way its structured there only raises a red-flag that things might not be paraphrased enough.


 * Done. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Reaction
 * Wired.com -> Wired (do not use the .com for this site as its just an extension of their magazine)


 * Done. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Why single out a specific province, Quebec, and not particular provinces elsewhere? That seems like a kind of bias.


 * Removed. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Finally, that last section should probably be moved right below development. It's similar to a "release" section in most of games. 陣 内 Jinnai 22:42, 18 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Done. GamerPro64  17:01, 24 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Are you certain Dreamtime is linked to the correct wikilink for what they are describing? ∞ 陣  内  Jinnai  00:39, 26 September 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't know what it was supposed to be linked to. I removed the wiki-link. GamerPro64  19:04, 26 September 2011 (UTC)


 * A thought, but you may want to talk with the team and see if they'll release their artwork of the original characters such as King Zeal, Kashmir and others under CC so you can get more images. ∞ 陣  内  Jinnai  15:53, 27 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Added image of King Zeal. GamerPro64  22:25, 11 October 2011 (UTC)