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Coachella Valley
Ah, so close. Guess I nominated it a bit early. Looking at it through a more jaundiced eye, the article has a lot of info but is a bit disjointed. - Lucky 6.9 04:44, 25 Oct 2004 (UTC)
 * Does the valley include the Salton sea? The picture makes it look like it does.  Geography of the area certainly needs to be covered. The Salton sea has a lot of unique features, controversies and environmental issues that could be covered if it is included in the valley. Also many other facets of the area besides the history and celebrity status/trivia need to be covered. - Taxman 23:35, Oct 26, 2004 (UTC)