Wikipedia:Peer review/Coal ball/archive2

Coal ball
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I've improved it as much as I can, and believe it is FA ready, but since it's my first one, I'd like to solicit some more input before going to FAC.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks, → Σ σ  ς. (Sigma) 07:55, 12 April 2013 (UTC)