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Coin Coin Chapter Three: River Run Thee


I've listed this article for peer review because… I'm trying to bring this article to GAN. It's not exactly obscure, but most of the sources are reviews and the such, so the article actually isn't too long, so worried that the article fails GAN criteria #3 (broadness). Also would appreciate a look at the sourcing and writing. Thanks, — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c) 15:20, 18 June 2022 (UTC)

I have checked the whole article. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:
 * 1. "American jazz musician Matana Roberts" - I don't know him but from the biography it looks like he is both more "sound experimentalist and jazz musician". Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * 2. "They described the album as "a more austere outing composed on loop and effects pedals (...) - they? Christopher Weingarten or someone else? 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c)
 * 3. Reference number 3. There is no title such as "Music Review: Matana Roberts - COIN COIN Chapter Three: river run thee".
 * ✅ — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c)
 * 4. Isn't "Jazz Scott" author of reference number 3? Same reference number 4 and probably others. Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c)
 * 5. Reference number why there is "www.bbc.co.uk" taken from URL address? Replace paremeter with "website". The website is called just BBC. Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c)
 * 6. "List of samples, adapted from the album's listing at cstrecords.com" - website is called "Constellation". Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ — PerfectSoundWhatever  (t; c)
 * 7. Reference for tracklist and credits ("All tracks are written by Matana Roberts.")? Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)
 * 8. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 20:30, 18 June 2022 (UTC)