Wikipedia:Peer review/Collaborative partnerships/archive1

Collaborative partnerships
This peer review discussion has been closed. I am a student and I am doing the final project which is a wikipedia article. I've listed this article for peer review because I need some suggestions to improve it.

Thanks, LujaynH (talk) 21:36, 9 December 2013 (UTC)

Comments by Neonchameleon

 * This is largely subjective, but the topic of collaborative partnerships doesn't feel like an encyclopaedia entry to me (even if it does make a category within Wikipedia) - it feels more like a disambiguation page title. Notably I'd say it falls foul of wp:NotDir - but this is a subjective impression.


 * Assuming it passes, it seems to be full of management-speak. "The collaborative partnerships between education and businesses form to benefit innovation and educational goals. Businesses benefit from unique academic solutions to real world problems. Institutions of various learning levels benefit from funding, industry support, and resources that would normally take away from academic problems."  There are no specifics there - and that's the entire article contents on that subject.