Wikipedia:Peer review/Concurrent estate/archive1

Concurrent estate and Leasehold estate
Several months ago, I consolidated two groups of articles into comprehensive articles on these relative concepts, then tweaked and expanded from there. It has occurred to me that these might be on the path to being featured articles, and could benefit from peer review. I present them together because the style and organization is prety much the same for both, so I assume they share the same faults. BD2412 T 23:03, 23 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Yup. They share the same faults.

=Nichalp  «Talk»=  11:44, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
 * 1) Insufficient lead text in one,
 * 2) sections are lopsided. Balance the content in sections and avoid the usage of subheadings as far as possible.
 * 3) Are these specifically US laws?
 * 4) No references
 * 5) No images
 * 6) External links are formatted incorrectly.