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Conveyed concept

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I've listed this article for peer review because I'm trying to make sure it meets guidelines…

Thanks,

Thedosmann (talk) 22:06, 17 January 2008 (UTC)


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I've added a number of references and sources in the cite.php format. I also added more content and made some minor editing changes in response to the above suggestions. If more editing or changes would be helpful I would appreciate suggestions. Thedosmann (talk) 15:26, 7 February 2008 (UTC)