Wikipedia:Peer review/Crater Glacier/archive1

Crater Glacier
I saw this was tagged so I am opening the thread. I'll make comments later, but it appears this article needs some more refs and the images need to be less crowded.--MONGO 06:11, 3 July 2007 (UTC)

Review by Spebi
 * The ref in the opening sentence should be added to the end of the sentence.
 * The opening paragraph (before the TOC) should be split into smaller paragraphs, for easier reading.
 * The refs at the end of the opening paragraph (and throughout the article) should not have spaces between eachother, and should be added immediatley after the full stop. (Example: ''' )
 * Try finding some relevant categories, and add the article to these categories. Don't add too many irrelevant categories, though.
 * Not sure though, but I think the coordinates are ment to be placed in the top right hand corner of the page (along the title line), but if the infobox has a place for them, then they should be placed in there.

Good luck with the article! :) Sebi  &#91; talk &#93; 06:20, 3 July 2007 (UTC)