Wikipedia:Peer review/Croxton Play of the Sacrament/archive1

Croxton Play of the Sacrament
I've listed this article for peer review because I would like suggestions on how to make this article better.

Thanks, Jre1991 (talk) 04:49, 6 November 2017 (UTC)

Well there are some issues that I found so I hope you can improve the article based on them: I hope this helps. If you have free time I wonder if you could check my peer review. Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 20:10, 30 December 2017 (UTC)
 * The lead should be expanded to at least two paragraphs as it meant to serve as a introduction to all the article's sections.
 * Some section should also be further expanded. If not possible, I would advise combining them.
 * Remember to reference every single paragraph per WP:Verifiability.
 * Characters section is unsourced as well as summary
 * Avoid the vimeo link at Performance History and instead transform it into a reference.
 * The summary might be rearranging. I would request help to the guild of copyeditors.