Wikipedia:Peer review/Cub Scouts (Boy Scouts of America)/archive1

Cub Scouts (Boy Scouts of America)
Since I have essentially rewritten this article over the last month I would like some outside review. --Gadget850 ( Ed) 16:21, 27 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Almost the entire article looks black- there are very few links, and I would suggest some more wikification. In addition, it would be better to increase the lead as suggested in WP:LEAD. AndyZ 00:21, 28 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks. I did some wikification.  I will reflect on the lead-in for a bit.  --Gadget850 ( Ed) 02:17, 28 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Expanded the lead-in to two paragraphs. At 27k words it should be 2-3 paragraphs per WP:LEAD.  --Gadget850 ( Ed) 15:00, 28 February 2006 (UTC)