Wikipedia:Peer review/Culture of California 1800s to mid 1900s/archive1

Culture of California 1800s to mid 1900s
I have done major copyditing on the article. Many of the League of Copyeditors have worked on the article. I have added many pictures to the article so it nows looks goood. I added a large summary of the article. I plan to bump the article up to FA status? Any suggestions. Please share helpful comments to help the lead and other sections. Showmanship is the key 01:07, 24 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 02:27, 24 January 2007 (UTC)


 * In my opinion, this is nowhere even close to Good Article status, much less Feature Article. For starters, just what is the article even about???? Its a mish-mash of California history, demographics, and a bunch of other California-related subjects, much of which doesn't even fall into the time period stated in the article. Most of the content is really material that belongs in different, already-existing articles. I seriously doubt this should be an article at all, much less a feature article. Sorry to be harsh, but that's my honest take on this article. Peter G Werner 08:42, 24 January 2007 (UTC)