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Curtis Sittenfeld
I wrote this biography of an Ohio writer whose first novel has gotten glowing reviews everywhere. It has links and photos, has been catagorized, and has a bibliography. Any comments? PedanticallySpeaking 17:40, Mar 24, 2005 (UTC)
 * It looks okay, although it's difficult to write a long article about somebody who's career is just starting out. So the name at the start of the second paragraph is her full name, and also that of her mother? I just wanted to clarify that. The second paragraph is perhaps a tad long. The first sentence of the fourth paragraph could be split in two. IMO of course. :) &mdash; RJH 17:04, 25 Mar 2005 (UTC)
 * Right, her mom is also Elizabeth says the Enquirer article. The NY Times article said she was the fifth "Elizabeth Curtis" in the family.  You were right about that clunky sentence.  I fixed it up and divided up the second graf.  PedanticallySpeaking 17:28, Mar 25, 2005 (UTC)