Wikipedia:Peer review/DNA Resequencer (Stargate)/archive2

DNA Resequencer (Stargate)

 * 1st PR
 * FAC

A lot have been improved since the last review. Is there anything still to be done? Thanks! --Tango 13:24, 19 August 2006 (UTC)

I would say that the lead is a tad big. Maybe cut down a paragraph? American Patriot 1776 02:05, 5 September 2006 (UTC)
 * That's a good sugestion. It is a bit big.  When I have more time i'll see what I can do.  Tobyk777 02:14, 5 September 2006 (UTC)