Wikipedia:Peer review/Dabbawala/archive1

Dabbawala
I recently wrote a duplicate article on this with another spelling, but when someone pointed me here, I found the existing article had more information. I'd like to help the editors who did this work to get it featured so: What is the preferred length for featured articles? -- [[User:MacGyverMagic|Mgm|(talk)]] 22:17, Oct 2, 2004 (UTC)
 * 1) At the moment it's kind of small. Any suggestions for expansion?
 * 2) Any comments on the lead section?
 * 3) Any comments on the existing body of the text?
 * As to length, there is no set guideline, the biggest thing is completeness. That said, I'm not sure when the last time an article too short to have multiple sections and a table of contents was promoted to featured article.  I'm not sure what can be expanded except if you can give an idea of what the price is exactly and a comparison of what that is to the person's salary that utilizes the Dabbawala.  Specific comments are that the text is a little too colloquial in parts, especially "fast food joints" and "B-schools".  That whole paragraph has some issues with clarity and grammar.  How are they able to do this task so well? - Taxman 03:14, Oct 3, 2004 (UTC)