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Danny Tidwell
I've listed this article for peer review because I feel that the article is on its way to becoming a GA, but a second set of eyes never hurts. I am a (if not the) principal contributor to this article, and have worked on it exhaustively.

Thanks,

Esprit15d 21:09, 21 August 2007 (UTC

Overall a fine article. If you update it as his career developments, the individual events (e.g. 'So You Think...' appearance) will need to be edited down to summaries to keep the overall article length reasonable.

The sidebar photo is dynamic, but his hand obscures his face. I recommend having a picture that shows his whole face.
 * Currently I haven't been able to find any other free images, but when I do, I will change it out.--Esprit15d 17:40, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * I just asked the webmaster at Danny's favorite fanblog for a photo. Danny invited him to a party last weekend, and I was hoping that he got a photo he might be willing to release into the GFDL.--Esprit15d 18:11, 23 August 2007 (UTC)

The career section's first sentence has a punctuation error with extra space added.✅

If there are Wikipedia articles on jazz dance and ballet, I recommend linking to them in the lead.✅

Recommend adding a Biography section and moving the Early Life and Early Career sections inside of it.

VisitorTalk 15:18, 23 August 2007 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your suggestions - I appreciate them.--Esprit15d 17:40, 23 August 2007 (UTC)