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David I of Scotland
Been working on this page off and on for a while in my user space. Aiming to get it passed as an FA, so wanna skip the avalanche of opposes, objects and comments by getting some more feedback first. The article appears very long; but not sure what to cut. Even though kb range is currently in the 90s, actual article text is only around 60. How would such an argument go down in FAC? Anyways, any feedback will be most appreciated. Regards, Calgacus (ΚΑΛΓΑΚΟΣ) 18:14, 12 February 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:51, 12 February 2007 (UTC)