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Dayton, Ohio
A decent article so far, what can be done to improve it? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 11kowrom (talk • contribs).
 * References for one. Also, there are a lot of lists that should be turned into prose where ever possible. PentawingTalk 04:54, 5 June 2006 (UTC)

— Wackymacs 11:06, 11 June 2006 (UTC)
 * 1)  Convert lists to prose
 * 2)  Fix red links
 * 3) Expand lead
 * 4) Dayton Peace Accords - expand this section
 * 5) Add footnotes, references. See WP:FOOTNOTE
 * 6) Check spelling, grammar, prose

The appropriate fixes have since been made.Texas141 (talk) 14:46, 24 April 2010 (UTC)