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Deep Throat (The X-Files episode)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to bring it to FA within the year. I've modelled it on a previous FA of mine, Squeeze (The X-Files), and feel it's in good shape. My main concerns are about the depth to which it's appropriate to discuss the character Deep Throat (this was his introduction), and how the scope of each heading works out. Any prose niggles are also worth pointing out but after a GOCE copyedit I'm confident that it's already to a high standard. Any input at all would be greatly appreciated; thanks in advance. GRAPPLE  X  11:42, 26 July 2012 (UTC)

Comments


 * Aurora Project is a dab link
 * "FBI special agents". Isn't "The show" missing. Should be "The show centers on FBI special agents"
 * "Deep Throat" premiered on the Fox network on September 17, 1993 and in the United Kingdom on BBC Two on September 24, 1994". How about: "Deep Throat" premiered on the Fox network on September 17, 1993, and was first broadcast in the United Kingdom on BBC Two on September 24, 1994
 * "the pilot" only "pilot" should be linked
 * "pictured in 2011" should just be "pictured". in 2011 is unneeded
 * Explain what a Nielsen rating is, and the share as in "Squeeze"
 * Did it mainly get positive reviews, mixed, negative?
 * FN5: Is missing publisher (Condé Nast)
 * FN7: Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
 * FN8: Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
 * FN12: Is missing publisher (The Onion)
 * FN16: Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
 * FN18: Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
 * FN19: IGN is missing publisher (News Corporation)
 * FN20: Is missing publisher (Time, Inc)
 * FN21: Is missing publisher (Austin Chronicle Corporation)
 * FN23: Is missing publisher (Star Media Group)
 * FN25: doubled quote marks per WP:MOS. Change to single marks
 * FN26: Is missing publisher (Dennis Publishing)
 * FN30: Is missing publisher (Time, Inc)
 * FN30: Don't think EW.com is needed. It already states that Entertainment Weekly is the work/publisher of it
 * "The X-Files Wiki" The X-Files needs italicization as its a wiki based on this show The X-Files
 * Per "Squeeze", the Wikiquote box should say The X-Files

TBrandley 16:24, 26 July 2012 (UTC)