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Delta Sigma Theta

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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because there have been significant edits, citations, and development of the history, purpose, and programs of the sorority. I believe the edits should qualify this page for a higher rating than a C-Class. Any feedback on what would be necessary to get it to a Featured Article level would also be appreciated.

Thanks, Divainred (talk) 17:00, 16 December 2008 (UTC)Divainred
 * I have been copyediting this article. The article looks B-level at best. For FA status, I think you should take a look at Delta Sigma Theta, a FA article. You need to rid the "Expansion" section, per WP:DIRECTORY, and the section looks listy. Model the history structure, like AKA's, highlighting what the organization did each decade. Find out what controversies the sorority has been in, per having a balanced point of view.


 * Images: I don't think you need File:Summit1.jpg. Per WP:FAIR, minimize the fair use images in the article. I am working on the map (it's fair use) and cleaning up one of the logos. I am working to make File:Deltagemslogo.jpg from .jpg to .svg without the shadows. I am still copyediting this article from "Expansion Programs" to the end.  miranda   20:27, 20 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I have made a better image for the Delta Woman .svg. I have also replaced the fair use map with a free image of the regions, since that map is obsolete. I noticed that some dates are linked. I think, per DATE, you should not link these.  miranda   21:27, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
 * I don't understand this sentence in the May Week section, The slogan "Invest in Education" was adopted and a week is set aside in May for programs highlighting academic and professional achievement.  miranda   21:31, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
 * The first traveling library was based in Franklin County, North Carolina, where 25 book baskets, with 35 books were circulated. - I don't understand this sentence, either.  miranda   21:42, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
 * 35 books each for one basket?  miranda   21:42, 23 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Membership section needs citations. You don't need a space between words and the citation.  miranda   22:02, 23 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Therefore, North and South Carolina left the Southern Region to become part of the new South Atlantic Region. - in the Regions section.  miranda   22:39, 23 December 2008 (UTC)


 * Citations 11-12, 14, 37, and 63 need to be properly formatted.  miranda   07:22, 27 December 2008 (UTC)
 * Images: I have listed some images on the talk page which you could ask people to donate to Wikipedia if they would agree to change their license to a free license (CC-BY or CC-BY-SA) if you have a Flickr account. I can help you with this. This is not urgent. I just want to reduce the number of fair use images in this article.
 * Some sections need expansion.
 * A sorority pin would be nice, although I heard that it was "illegal for the sorority" to have the pin on the internet due to copyright reasons.
 * Delta Sigma Theta conventions.  miranda   05:03, 28 December 2008 (UTC)