Wikipedia:Peer review/Democratic peace theory/archive2

Democratic Peace Theory
I am requesting another peer review in order to get some new perspectives on this article. The majority of the editing is currently being done by myself and two others, and has, unfortunately, somewhat turned into a NPOV battle and a revert war at times. Specifically I would like comments with regard to NPOV, length, and scope. --Scaife 23:28, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
 * The old peer review can bee seen here /Archive_1 Dec 2005. --Scaife 23:31, 11 February 2006 (UTC)


 * I think you are both doing a pretty good job. I'd suggest adding a few pictures for general viewing pleasure. Transform hyperlinkis into proper inline citations, as well as remove such things as 'See the bibliography linked to under External links, below.' - it should be transformed into a note, again. Lead should be expanded. As for getting some more useful info, have you considered emailing scholars involved in the research asking them for external peer review? Who knows, maybe some will reply? Stranger things have happened.--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 17:19, 20 February 2006 (UTC)


 * I've heard a number of variant and nick names for this. Are those being redirected? The formatting needs to be fixed up= the top of the article especially looks horrible. Those various tags are rather offputting as well. Also, generally See Alsos come first, then References, then Notes, and only then are External Links provided. --maru (talk) contribs 05:35, 22 February 2006 (UTC)
 * Comment on this, for the record. The external links here are relatively important, and the notes and bibliography are extremely long. There was a compaint, which I thought well-taken, that the external links were invisibie, so they were moved. Septentrionalis 15:19, 8 March 2006 (UTC)