Wikipedia:Peer review/Deseret alphabet/archive1

Deseret alphabet
I've listed this article for peer review because…I've expanded the article from ≈17000 bytes to over 65000 bytes  in a ten day marathon. Last time I did something like this (West Coast Customs, also the first major project I undertook on Wikipedia), I leaped right into a GA nomination without getting any advice: so I failed. Once again I have been staring at the article too long to be able to see its faults, so I humbly submit it for other Wikipedians to give me advice if they please before I try to get this article GA status also. Thank you very much for your time Psiĥedelisto (talk) 12:01, 16 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Closed. I received adequate third party review via Template:Did you know nominations/Deseret alphabet and have listed this article at WP:GAN. Psiĥedelisto (talk) 08:03, 28 January 2017 (UTC)