Wikipedia:Peer review/Dhul-Qarnayn/archive1

Dhul-Qarnayn
This is an article about a controversial but obscure subject related to Islam, the Qur'an, and Alexander the Great. The article has been expanded a great deal, and information has been moved to it from Alexander the Great and Alexander in the Qur'an. Zeno of Elea 16:38, 8 October 2005 (UTC)

Ryan Norton T 06:45, 14 October 2005 (UTC)
 * 1) Generally blockquote heavy - I'd paraphrase just a bit more
 * 2) "Historical background" - first paragraph seems kind of short
 * 3) "Muslim veneration of Alexander the Great" - There are some embedded  here which just results in a bunch of odd whitespace

It'd look better if the double dashes were replaced with an mdash (& mdash ;   without the spaces, looks like this: &mdash;). CTOAGN 15:01, 18 October 2005 (UTC)