Wikipedia:Peer review/Digor people/archive1

Digor people
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because I just made some translations from ruwiki. I need a general review regarding the grammar and other issues.

Thanks, Ali-al-Bakuvi (talk) 13:08, 19 April 2014 (UTC)

I've given the article a copy edit for grammar & fluency; it wasn't that bad before, so I hope my edits improved it. There are a few statements, though, that I expect would be flagged as needing citations. -- llywrch (talk) 16:00, 2 May 2014 (UTC)
 * llywrch writes:

Comments by Dudley Miles
 * "in USSR was considered a separate language until 1937" - what happened after that?
 * The census numbers the Digor in hundreds and estimates 52,000 - why the discrepancy (and why does the Digor dialect article say 100,000?
 * The article is short of references, particularly on the crucial last two sentences of the first paragraph and the first three sentences of History.
 * An interesting short article but needs more work on clarification and references. Dudley Miles (talk) 10:31, 17 May 2014 (UTC)