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Dio Brando
As well as I have tried, I still fill things are holding this article back. It's really a nagging feeling that I have. And it won't go away. - Malomeat 00:44, 8 December 2006 (UTC)


 * No offense, but, well the page doesn't stand by itself very well. It seems to requires a pre-existing knowledge of this "JoJo universe". Who, for example, is the "megalomaniacal villain"? What is the Joestar household? Who is Jonathan? (The infobox only says "adoptive brother".) I got a few paragraphs into the page before it lost my interest due to my lack of familiarity with the setting. The intro seems a little on the short side. &mdash; RJH (talk) 18:51, 8 December 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 21:36, 10 December 2006 (UTC)