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Dissenters March
Please Peer Review; has a total of 47 inline citations. --Parker007 04:20, 18 April 2007 (UTC)
 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 03:23, 5 May 2007 (UTC)


 * A few comments that I hope are helpful:
 * First paragraph is a single, long sentence. Consider breaking it up into two or more sentences.
 * The section stub needs to be addressed, as does the "citation needed" tag.
 * There are multiple one-sentence paragraphs that would look better if they were merged appropriately, or else expanded.
 * The references should consistently use "cite" templates for proper formating.
 * Thanks. &mdash; RJH (talk) 18:32, 14 May 2007 (UTC)