Wikipedia:Peer review/Doctor Who missing episodes/archive1

Doctor Who missing episodes
This has been considerably expanded and cut together from a subsection on the main Doctor Who page, and I intend to send it for FAC in a bit. First, of course, I'd like to get input from non WikiProject Doctor Who people to see if there's anything more we can do with this. It'd be nice to have a Doctor Who FA that is firmly rooted in the real world, so to speak. --khaosworks (talk • contribs) 02:38, 8 October 2005 (UTC)

The lead needs wome work to better summarise the article. There several long run-on sentences, like this one
 * ''This was mostly done because Enterprises' rights agreements with the actors and writers to sell the programmes abroad had expired, and with many broadcasters around the world now switching to colour transmission, it was not deemed worthwhile extending agreements to sell the older black and white material.

So you should go though the article again- or get someone else to copyedit it- to make sure the flow is good and the sentences digestable. Otherwise it's a great article.--nixie 04:05, 8 October 2005 (UTC)