Wikipedia:Peer review/Dog/archive1

Dog
Was FILLED with POV and unwarranted editorializing. I've tried to clean it up. I'd love a second opinion. --Dante Alighieri | Talk 01:48, Dec 16, 2004 (UTC)
 * You did a good job. Elf | Talk 02:31, 16 Dec 2004 (UTC)

Looks good now.
 * The page is too large. Current size is 48kb. Wikipedia reccomends <30 kb and 32 max. Why don't you précis the article, and add large chunks of material to related articles? Also consider cutting down on the ToC. Its simply too long. Nichalp 20:30, Jan 15, 2005 (UTC)