Wikipedia:Peer review/Don't Bite the Sun/archive1

Don't Bite the Sun
This peer review discussion has been closed. Hello,

My research class and I have created the page on Don't Bite The Sun and we would love some feedback on the page. There's a lot to be done in terms of further research and peer editing of the style and diction used in the writing of the article. Feel free to edit the work!

Thank you, Jared Bland