Wikipedia:Peer review/Double bass/archive1

Double bass
General cleanup of the article in terms of style and other FA criteria, copyediting, etc. &mdash;  ßott e  siηi  (talk) 21:40, 30 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Please expand the lead to conform with guidelines at WP:LEAD. The article should have an appropriate number of paragraphs as is shown on WP:LEAD, and should adequately summarize the article.
 * Take care of the huge amount of s.


 * Per WP:MOS, headings generally should not repeat the title of the article. For example, if the article was Ferdinand Magellan, instead of using the heading  ==Magellan's journey== , use  ==Journey== .


 * As per WP:MOS, please do not link words in headings.


 * The article will need references. See WP:CITE and WP:V for more information.


 * Please provide WP:CITE information for references/footnotes. See also WP:CITE/ES; templates like and  may be useful here.


 * Thanks, AndyZ t 22:07, 30 May 2006 (UTC)


 * Yes, we added all the citation neededs generously as an effort for the overall improvement in the future. &mdash;  ßott e  siηi  (talk) 22:11, 30 May 2006 (UTC)