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Dragon Quest VIII: Journey of the Cursed King
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because this article has been improved to GA and listed as such for over a year now. I have been thinking about having some comments and suggestions on how to improve it for possibly an FA.

Thanks, Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 03:38, 25 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I plan to do a full review of the article, but, for now, I'll just link you to a few pieces of reference material I found through the online print archive: Brief Play Magazine Interview with Level 5 President, Game Informer review, Game Informer preview. Hope they're useful. JimmyBlackwing (talk) 07:36, 25 January 2011 (UTC)


 * Comments by Jinnai
 * The songlists need to be unhidden per WP:ACCESS.
 * The first paragraph in the characters section should be redone as it contradicts the second paragraph by naming the party-members as the only "main characters" - the other two characters would be considered main characters, especially when one is a titular character. Better to have them as "main protagonists", "player characters" or "playable party members"
 * You can site the NA video game itself for the CN in development and release
 * Added a CN for the last sentance.
 * You should explain more about the "alternate ending" in the plot section that's mentioned. Not too much, but if its possible to get multiple endings, that should be mentioned in the gameplay section. If the alternate ending is part of the storyline itself (ie a fake ending or something like that) it should be made clear in the plot. 陣 内 Jinnai 21:05, 27 January 2011 (UTC)