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Drama Queen (Ivy Queen album)
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because, I want to get the article to GA status. I had two editors review the page and one of them told me to request a PR.

Thanks, DivaKnockouts (talk) 16:43, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Comments The Rambling Man (talk) 11:37, 1 July 2012 (UTC)
 * "alongside the help of various" just "with the help of..."
 * "Hiram Cruz, Francisco Saldaña" don't have articles, are they notable enough to be included in this list?
 * " Francisco Saldaña, Marcos Masis" -> " Francisco Saldaña and Marcos Masis".
 * Try to avoid repetition like "The album was.... The album was...".
 * Avoid over linking (ie. don't link De La Ghetto twice in two paragraphs for example).
 * Is there not a link for Latin Grammy Awards you can use in the lead?
 * "a reggaetón version " again, you've already linked reggaeton, but oddly without a diacritic the first time, and with a diacritic the second time.
 * " never charted on " -> "failed to chart on".
 * "2008-2010" in the infobox, needs an en-dash, not a hyphen per WP:DASH.
 * " its 5th year" fifth.
 * "Unlike, Drama Queen or" no need for comma.
 * "Drama Queen is the first album where Ivy wasn't in a " consistency in italics, and avoid contractions (i.e. "was not" rather than "wasn't").
 * "Ivy had this to say:[3]" just "Ivy said:[3]"
 * " A studio owned by reggaeton production moguls Luny Tunes." this sentence should be merged with the former somehow because on its own it isn't a complete sentence.
 * In fact "A studio owned by reggaeton production moguls Luny Tunes. The album was produced by reggaeton production duo Luny Tunes..." is repetitive and doesn't make much sense to me.
 * The "English" in the translated names shouldn't be in italics.
 * Check all instances of the album name are in italics.
 * "Music and themes" is unreferenced.
 * Don't overlink "English" six or seven times in the next section. And again, not in italics.
 * In the personnel section "Jose Cotto - Mixer" replace all these spaced hyphens with en-dashes (per WP:DASH).
 * Ref titles also need to use en-dashes instead of spaced hyphens where applicable.