Wikipedia:Peer review/Edna Mahan Correctional Facility for Women/archive1

Edna Mahan Correctional Facility for Women
I would appreciate any comments, particularly those pointing out errors of wikipedia convention. I know the link "1" in the page body (supporting the fact that an official was sentenced to five years) isn't correctly formatted.Eh Nonymous 17:54, 23 May 2006 (UTC)


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 * Thanks, AndyZ t 19:56, 23 May 2006 (UTC)