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Edward Scissorhands
I have done a lot of work on this article, cleaned it up and added extensive information - it's a big improvement from what it previously looked like. I'd like some comments and suggestions on how to upgrade this article to a GA/FA status. Cheers, James Morton (User) 09:57, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
 * This citation "Roger Ebert of The Chicago Sun Times was one of the few to give it a dismissive review, feeling it may be too dark for children and lacked character building, and concluded that the end was so lame that it was disheartening to the viewer.[20]" doesn't exist - can you please fix that? Also, the prose rambles in places, especially the plot. -Malkinann 00:01, 27 May 2007 (UTC)


 * The sourcing information for the screenshots are lacking in detail, and, vitally, fair use rationales. Suggest looking at existing FAs, e.g. Jaws (film) to see what is required. A section about the music would be good too. Suggest using cite web etc templates for consistency and encourage all relevant information. The JPS talk to me  19:24, 27 May 2007 (UTC)