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Edward Wright (mathematician)
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I've listed this article for peer review because I'd like to get this article up to Good Article status, and particularly welcome comments on its general readability. — Cheers, Jack Lee  –talk– 01:05, 21 May 2008 (UTC)


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This is my first peer review, so here goes... Hope that's at least a little helpful. Good luck. -FrankTobia (talk) 16:16, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Comments from
 * Lead section doesn't have any citations; some may prefer this, but it makes me wary
 * Comment: I don't think citations in the lead section are necessary as they would simply repeat citations that occur in the main text. — JackLee,, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
 * The "probably September or October 1561" in his birth date should be cited or clarified later on
 * Notes section looks cluttered; consider separating references from citations in the style of Charles Darwin
 * In the same way, the "Works" section looks cluttered
 * "It is possible that he followed in the footsteps of his elder brother Thomas" in the first section sounds like speculation or WP:OR
 * Comment: It is a speculation, but one made by Wright's biographers and properly referenced. — JackLee,, 29 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Response: Perhaps make it more explicit, something like: "Parsons and Morris conjecture he followed in his brother's footsteps by attending school in Hardingham"? -FrankTobia (talk) 17:24, 25 May 2008 (UTC)
 * First sentence in "Navigation and cartography" section sounds like a run-on
 * On the whole the text reads well, but I suggest getting a review from a better copyeditor than I


 * Thanks for taking the time to review the article. My comments are above. — Cheers, Jack Lee  –talk– 16:26, 25 May 2008 (UTC)