Wikipedia:Peer review/Edwards Air Force Base/archive1

Edwards Air Force Base
I've been working on this article with the hopes of it becoming my first FAC. There's a minor todo list on the talk page, but I'd like input on any other aspects of the article that people think could be improved.

-Lommer | talk 20:14, 3 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I'm curious after reading the article about what life is like for all those people living on the base, is there any more information around about general life on the base, schools, what they do for entertainment etc? --nixie 13:28, 4 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * Ah good call, I'll start a section on civilian or off-duty life at the base. -Lommer | talk 00:26, 5 Jun 2005 (UTC)


 * I kinda speed-read through the article, but I didn't see anything pertaining to BRAC 2005. The page has an "mili-BRAC" templete link, so I would include an explanation for it. TomStar81 05:33, 19 Jun 2005 (UTC)