Wikipedia:Peer review/Effects of Hurricane Wilma in The Bahamas/archive1

Effects of Hurricane Wilma in The Bahamas
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like feedback before taking it to a FA nomination, which I have never done before.

Thanks, Ks0stm (T•C•G) 19:59, 24 January 2010 (UTC)


 * I reviewed this last year (at WikiProject Tropical cyclones/Assessment/Effects of Hurricane Wilma in The Bahamas). Have these issues all been addressed? – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 21:42, 24 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I wasn't aware of that assessment, but now that I am I went through and corrected what I could find a way to correct. Ks0stm (T•C•G) 22:56, 24 January 2010 (UTC)
 * Looks better. I'm still concerned about the reliability of certain references (particularly http://bahamasvacationguide.com/wilma/index.html). Also, Wayne Neely's The Major Hurricanes to Affect the Bahamas (2006) has tons of info on the storm that isn't in the article. If you can't get access to that book, I can add it for you eventually. – Juliancolton  &#124; Talk 00:29, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
 * I don't have that book, and my local library doesn't carry it, but I submitted an Interlibrary loan request for the book asking for it by the 31st. If it would be quicker for you to add the information then go for it, and I will just read the book for background knowledge when it gets here. In the meantime, is there anything else I could fix in the article? Ks0stm (T•C•G) 01:37, 25 January 2010 (UTC)
 * The ILL I requested said it would take several weeks to get it lent, as apparently only a handful of libraries across the United States have the book, and none in my home state. If you could add the information, it would be much appreciated. Ks0stm (T•C•G) 16:24, 27 January 2010 (UTC)