Wikipedia:Peer review/Eggerland series/archive1

Eggerland series
I have written this article about the Eggerland series and would just like to know if readers think it's clear and explanatory. Do the pages about individual games help? I thought it was good to keep the general series info in one big page and game specific info in separate pages. --Sivak 21:10, 26 July 2005 (UTC)
 * First thing that strikes me is the lack of references; that is needed if you ever plan on taking this to FAC. WegianWarrior 07:57, 27 July 2005 (UTC)


 * References, eh? I had actually thought about this, but I'm not entirely sure what I could reference as a lot of this is simply my observations from gameplay and me being descriptive.  Do you think the instruction manuals would qualify as a valid reference?  Or maybe the HAL Corporation itself (as they are the makers)?  That's where quite a few of the game terms come from.  I'm not providing the solutions to the games, so no referencing could be done on that topic.  Any insight would be appreciated.  --Sivak 17:04, 27 July 2005 (UTC)


 * References would be written sources that supports what the article says - either in hardcopy (books and magazines) or online. WegianWarrior 03:10, 28 July 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, I do know of some places that have scans and copies of the game manuals. There's also one site I have in the links currently in English which contains some general information.  I also included a Japanese site, although I'm not sure if that's good or bad.  There is no Japanese counterpart to this article (yet).  There's a French site with information about Eggerland Mystery and the solution.  Do any of these sound like they would be valid?  Thanks.  --Sivak 00:19, 30 July 2005 (UTC)