Wikipedia:Peer review/Egyptian God Cards/archive1

Egyptian God Cards
I've listed this article for peer review because it has made large leaps towards being NPOV and out-of-universe in the past couple of months through a series of merges and vast rewrites. A review will help bring to light problems with the articles that others like myself have missed and allow us to make it even better.

Thanks,

The Clawed One (talk) 00:29, 27 November 2007 (UTC)


 * A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style. If you would find such a review helpful, please click here. Thanks, APR t 02:46, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
 * My thanks, the review has proven helpful for cleaning up the article. The Clawed One (talk) 05:17, 29 November 2007 (UTC)
 * Per WP:FICT you want to write from an out-of-universe point of view. When I read "The Egyptian Gods are one-of-a-kind all-powerful cards created by Maximillion Pegasus," I went looking to his article to see if he is a game designer with a weird name, rather than a fictional character himself.
 * The article says "when summoned..." giving game effects. Later the article says "they do not possess effect text". So which is it?
 * "he God Cards once demanded high prices on the secondary market." Give a reference saying that, please. --AnonEMouse (squeak) 15:37, 11 December 2007 (UTC)