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Elmira College
I was hoping for a review of the article as a whole. I have added a lot of information to this article, though I know that it is not well-written. The "History of Elmira College" section contains many facts, but some of them might not be necessary for an entry about the college in general. Also, the "Buildings of the College" section is a simple list; many may not be necessary to include. Please suggest improvements for these sections in particular, and the article as a whole. Paul 17:29, 27 August 2006 (UTC)