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Embodiment of Scarlet Devil


First time peer reviewer here - I'm listing this article for peer review because I really want to get this up to GA status for the possibility of it being nominated for FA next August 11 (20 year anniversary). I've spent a lot of time rearranging the article and adding sources - it was pretty barren before, and a lot of text was completely irrelevant (can be seen on other Touhou game articles such as Perfect Cherry Blossom) to the point it was nominated for deletion last year. I can imagine there's a lot of improvements that I could still work on however (improving wording and conciseness). I've been using articles such as Cave Story, Ikaruga and Crash Bandicoot (another page in the review process) as examples of what the page should structure like, but I'm still not entirely sure. I don't know if the page is already alright in the image area or if it needs an image of the developer, either... Another thing to mention is that a lot of my sources used are Japanese-language sources and I'm unsure about whether or not that's ok as well. It's my first time doing this, so all input is very much appreciated. Thank you very much :) Kettleonwater (talk) 15:43, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
 * I think I will leave some thoughts here. For one, there is no section on release of it nor is the release platform/date sourced anywhere in the article? In addition, some of the sources in the lead are probably better off being moved to the body as per WP:LEADCITE. Anyway, I have a peer review of my own open and would appreciate any comments you could give. Regards, Link20XX (talk) 17:24, 29 July 2021 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Now sourced release date/platform and moved lead sources to the body. I'll try and check your article but keep in mind I'm a newbie! Kettleonwater (talk) 19:43, 29 July 2021 (UTC)