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Empire Earth: The Art of Conquest
I've been working on this for a while, and have been walking a little blind since no GA expansion pack articles exist. I'm looking for any improvements before I go to GAC. Thoughts?--Clyde (talk) 04:23, 11 March 2007 (UTC)


 * I would like to first say that this article really impressed me. I've noticed that many articles concerning expansion packs of computer games only have a few paragraphs to them. I like how you extensively described certain aspects. Even though I didn't have time to read the whole article, I do have some suggestions. First, perhaps you may want to add a separate section of article devoted to explaining new aspects that were added to the game that weren't seen in Empire Earth. Therefore, a viewer won't have to read the whole article and and pick bits and pieces out to find out what was newly added to the game. Hope this helped!Socom49 16:43, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * Well the gameplay section is really just a prosified and referenced list of all the new features added to the game. Do you think I should rename the "Gameplay" section to something like "Features" or "New Gameplay"?--Clyde (talk) 17:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC)