Wikipedia:Peer review/Eskaya/archive1

Eskaya
So much recent work has been done on the article. Any feedback is needed on what needs to be cleaned up? What's broken, incorrect, needs fixing? --Pinay (talk•email) 04:33, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

First of all I give the article 9.2 out of 10.


 * More pictures are needed
 * Good amount of general information is visible but, it lacks valuable “hidden” information, this means start focusing on the little information instead of all the outlined info.
 * Grammar check, make the article sound more like an encyclopedia

I have no knowledge what so ever about Eskaya, but by simple look and read exercises I found that more information is needed, pictures will need to be added. Once this has been done nominated it for good article status. Also can you review or grammar check my article Ford BA Falcon and if it is good enough nominate it for Good Article status.SenatorsTalk 00:20, 9 January 2007 (UTC)