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Ethiopia
The article needs to be reviewed for POV compliance as well as ways to build a more balanced and encyclopedic article. Primarily, the intro and history sections need to be reviewed. Thanks, Strothra 16:37, 11 October 2007 (UTC)


 * llywrch
 * I've been watching this page from the sidelines, off and on, for a long time & agree that the history section needs to be pruned back into a compact narrative. Some of the other sections likewise need to be pruned, and worked back into shape; the religion section is one example. I've held off on this because it would require a huge investment of time and effort, & at the moment I'm unable to make a solid commitment to this -- although I'm willing to contribute where I can.


 * As for "NPOV" issues, especially in the lead, I'm not sure I see them. Yes there are some, but I consider them minor & due more to less-experienced editors attepting to add everything they think is important than to intentional POV-pushing. (Believe me, I am familiar with the potential topics & am a little surprised that I haven't seen more of that.) -- llywrch 17:54, 12 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:11, 13 October 2007 (UTC)