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Ethnic conflict
I'd appreciate some views on this article, which I found in a bit of a sorry state and have added references to and tidied up. Would be good to get advice on what changes to make, as well as how to expand it further. Cordless Larry 16:46, 17 June 2007 (UTC)
 * The lead needs to be much longer than that.--Rmky87 14:02, 19 June 2007 (UTC)