Wikipedia:Peer review/Euphoria Festival/archive1

Euphoria Festival
I've listed this article for peer review because…

This article has not yet been edited by anyone other than the author. I believe the content is sufficient and valid, but it could use a second opinion!

Thanks, Hkkelly (talk) 23:46, 7 September 2016 (UTC)


 * Sorry for the late review User:Hkkelly. There were some issues about this article that motivated me to write:

Other than that, I think the article could become a GA once its issues are solved. Good luck. Also, if you have free time, could you check my own peer review? Regards.Tintor2 (talk) 14:18, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
 * First of all, avoid Carson Creek Ranch's reference and move it to external links.
 * Secondly, add refrences to every section. You might also remove the reference from the lead per WP:Lead
 * Lastly, this might be the most difficult but can you create an "origins section"?