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Extreme ironing
Any advice for this article? -- Zanimum 15:10, 10 January 2007 (UTC)

A few things come to mind after a read:
 * The image copyright status needs to be sorted out. Ask for permission for the image to be released under a free license, or seek another image under a free license.
 * All references to media articles (The Guardian, etc) should be cited.
 * What are the criticisms of extreme ironing? The article seems weighted towards praising it.
 * How about more on the Extreme Ironing Bureau and the breakaway Urban Housework. Is this a big rivalry? Also need more general information about the EIB. When did it form?
 * What is the Rowenta Trophy? Who sponsors it? Why is it important? — WiseKwai 19:30, 10 January 2007 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR t 21:00, 10 January 2007 (UTC)

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question. You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, SenatorsTalk 00:36, 11 January 2007 (UTC)
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