Wikipedia:Peer review/F.E.A.R./archive1

F.E.A.R.
Plans are made to have it copyedited, and the issues on the to-do list are being taken care of. However, constructive criticism from the peer review folks before FAC never hurts. Any suggestions are welcome. JimmyBlackwing 05:15, 19 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Another great video game article. I have one concern, the game seems to leave out music. Only thing I remember being mentioned is that the sound effects were physically made and recorded. Oh a mention that some critic praised the music/sound. Can more be added? Other than that I'll definetely vote support at fac. - Tutmosis  16:28, 19 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Good catch. More information about the music has been added to the "Atmosphere" section. JimmyBlackwing 17:25, 19 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Ruhrfisch 02:10, 22 October 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the suggestions. I've made the image captions more concise. I think the lead summarizes the article well as it is, however. In addition, I do not see any weasel words outside of quotes, and dates are already linked in the way you described. Finally, as I stated before, it will be copyedited to remove poor wording, redundancies and the rest. JimmyBlackwing 20:20, 22 October 2006 (UTC)