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Faidherbe Bridge



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This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because i would like to know if i could propose it for FA.

Thanks, Mario  1987  13:50, 18 February 2008 (UTC)

My comments on the article:
 * Lead section is only one sentence. The lead should be 1-2 paragraphs for an article this size and summarize the whole article.
 * Some paragraphs have no references.
 * "With all it's difficulties" should be its not it's.
 * Some of the images seem to have licensing problems. The stamp image has a licensing statement saying it can only be used on an article illustring the stamp.  What is the date of the postcards?  It says 100+ years beyond the author's death, but you don't give a publication date for either card
 * The picture legends on the postards should be relevant to the article. Discuss the picture and not the fact it is a postcard
 * The references are not properly formatted and don't have access dates for the urls.
 * Overall the writing needs improvement. It is certainly understandble, but is not well written enough to be FA status as written.  Biomedeng (talk) 03:07, 27 February 2008 (UTC)