Wikipedia:Peer review/Family Guy/archive7

Family Guy
This peer review discussion has been closed. I've listed this article for peer review because even if the article is marked as a good article, I thought that we could take it to the next level. I would like to discuss about what needs to be done, or what should have been done to the article to make it to a featured article.
 * Previous peer review

Thanks,  Blurred   Lines   23:59, 22 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi- I can't promise I've got time for a full peer review, but here are some thoughts anyway. These all focus on possible expansion; if these are going to make the article too long, look into splitting the article, with good summaries in the main article. J Milburn (talk) 21:01, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
 * The international broadcast section is poor. There are some citation needed tags, and some "unknown"s. This can't be all there is, either. I find it hard to believe that it's not shown in Spain or Germany, for instance. Are those in non-English speaking countries dubbed, or do they just have subtitles? It's not a great article, but, still, look at the amount of information in Non-English versions of The Simpsons.
 * Looking at the other media/merch sections- The section on the crossovers is poor- half-line paragraphs are not ideal. There's not a lot of information on some video games, but there are on others. There must be more merch- clothing? Lunch boxes? All that sort of thing. You mention only some of the books.
 * I'm assuming there are going to be some scholarly sources out there- we really should be using them if possible. Infuriatingly, Google Scholar is clogged with those awful Wikipedia print-off books, so I couldn't really find much there, but a quick poke elsewhere has resulted in a few potentially interesting hits. See this article, for instance.